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Line Editing
Line editing is the next step in mirroring what was fixed with developmental edits. Writer and editor added the content, took out some content, and reordered things in the right way. Now they want it worded in a way that matches the writer's tone, the subject matter, the demographic, and the vision. |
Sentence-Level Revisions
Edits are done with Microsoft Word tracked changes and comments. I can either flag and suggest sentence revisions, or I can make the revisions using tracked changes and have the author approve them.
- Elevate dialogue (making sure it's realistic, engaging, and well-paced).
- Enhance word choice (or remove uncharacteristic word choice) to describe concepts, ideas, and imagery in the most effective way.
- Rephrase sentences for sentence variety and conciseness.
- Reader sensitivity—making sure specific sentences respect diverse readership.
- Flagging sentences that read awkwardly, confusingly, or out of character/tone.
- Making sure the same information isn't repeated in different ways within the paragraph.
- Helping identify areas that do not "flow" or transition well.
- Much more!
Edits are done with Microsoft Word tracked changes and comments. I can either flag and suggest sentence revisions, or I can make the revisions using tracked changes and have the author approve them.
What to Expect:
How long does it take?
This task is primarily editor-oriented. It's laborious and detailed, though, so please plan on four to six weeks for an average book's word count. Then it's up to the author how meticulously they want to review my changes to "accept," "reject," or discuss something. Some "accept all" where others go through each edit. I support either route!
How involved is the writer?
I prefer to make edits or suggestions and send back in full when it's complete. Sending back edits by chapter or section can be considered. After edits are made or suggested, it is the author's job to implement suggestions or reject them. If they disagree with an edit, they are free to revert back to the original. The author can expect at least a couple hours of work once the edits are complete to look over everything and write down questions.
Is it necessary?
Line editing is a valuable step in reaching the right demographic for the book, but if the writer is protective of their words and do not want to change them, then line editing would likely be a waste of time and money. If you struggle with English or creativity but are passionate about the subject, I highly recommend line editing.
How much does it cost?
Each manuscript has different needs. For light line editing, I typically charge $0.02 per word. For intense, extensive help, my rates can be as high as $0.05 per word.
This task is primarily editor-oriented. It's laborious and detailed, though, so please plan on four to six weeks for an average book's word count. Then it's up to the author how meticulously they want to review my changes to "accept," "reject," or discuss something. Some "accept all" where others go through each edit. I support either route!
How involved is the writer?
I prefer to make edits or suggestions and send back in full when it's complete. Sending back edits by chapter or section can be considered. After edits are made or suggested, it is the author's job to implement suggestions or reject them. If they disagree with an edit, they are free to revert back to the original. The author can expect at least a couple hours of work once the edits are complete to look over everything and write down questions.
Is it necessary?
Line editing is a valuable step in reaching the right demographic for the book, but if the writer is protective of their words and do not want to change them, then line editing would likely be a waste of time and money. If you struggle with English or creativity but are passionate about the subject, I highly recommend line editing.
How much does it cost?
Each manuscript has different needs. For light line editing, I typically charge $0.02 per word. For intense, extensive help, my rates can be as high as $0.05 per word.
